Well, let's see.

Just like you suggested, this video is really short. I don't based on length, though, so whatever. Just thought that would be a good topic to open up on.

Your drawing abilities are fine, for what you're going for; something like Edd's World, right? You may want to thicken up the outline a bit, but otherwise, it's just fine.

Now, for the actual content of the video. Most of the jokes were corny, and the way they couldn't get the story right was terrible. I'll admit, I laughed at "I have no idea what I'm doing," but you need to work on your humor.

Another thing that was kind of annoying. "Oh my god, what the fridge?" This is Newgrounds, you're more than welcome to curse, and if you can't, the "beep" kind of censor is what most people use. Not really important, but I'm a critic, I'm here to nitpick.

One more thing, which I'm not taking off for. I don't understand the last guy's "Super Power." He can draw really well? He has an exceptional memory? There was no hand holding the pencil, so he's psychic? I just don't get it.

Overall, I'll give you a 7/10. I think this has promise and could improve really well, so I'll round up to a 4/5. Good luck out there.

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I can't, for the life for me, make sense of this.

In total, each character only had one sprite used, and neither of them looked very "fighty". While I'm ranting about the sprites, they didn't even stand on the background. It looked like a puppet show, for Pete's sake.

Your voice actors were okay, I'd probably do worse, but they spoke too quietly, and I couldn't understand them at times. The background music was too quiet as well, and it didn't sound very "fighty."

The story failed to illustrate a point in any of this, and the fight quality certainly didn't make up for it.

Admittedly, I'm giving this a 2/10 and a 1/5 out of pity. From now on, when I want epicness, I'll opt for Epic Battle Fantasy.

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I feel in the dark.

I really enjoyed playing this game. I didn't experience any control issues, like others have said, but there were other problems.

First off, there were a few continuity errors. If I'm invincible, what's the rush? Nothing can hurt me, right? Also, a few "Tiles with Letters" seemed to be nowhere to be found. I entered every room, and I didn't see all of them. I really would like to know what the message says, could anyone tell me over a PM?

Also, I really don't get the storyline, here. How was I turned into a robot? Why don't I remember anything until that far in? Why did I kill my entire family?! DETAILS, MAN, DETAILS. Overall, the game seems like one giant "What the Hell?" to me. Over the entire game, I expect the story to be a kid being devoted and loving to his mother, then becoming more challenging and questioning as he grows up...until I "Powered Up" the damaged reactor. Then, I was like, "WHAT?!"

Overall, I'm going to give you a 7/10, and since the gameplay was nice, I'll round up to 4/5 for the portal. It's okay to have no story--look at the original Super Mario Bros.--but if you're going to put one in, do it well. I'd hate to see this become the next Level Up--the promised sequel that never came.

Also, LOL.
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Metroid.

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The war is inevitable.

People will fight, must fight. Regardless of what they fight with, protest signs, swords, guns, nuclear weapons, they will fight. Unless you're on one side or the other, they'll trample you on the way to the battleground.

You can join black and fight white, you can join white and fight black, but you can't become gray and stop a war. Why? Because, in all the ignorance that is humanity, compromises make nobody happy.

I 5/5, 10/10, and favorite this, not because of its graphics, not because of its gameplay, but because of the deep message it portrayed. I have received the message, and every day I use my own experiences to add to it. Thank you so much, Mister Greg, for opening my eyes.

22:32, is that fast?

I was expecting a clone of "Rabbit Wants Cake," that stupid game from awhile back, but nonetheless, I clicked, and once again, I was wrong.

I can't really think of a flaw for this game, it's just that I've played better.

I must say, I expected less from you.

I'm rather suprised with the results. As always, I feel you can do better, but, well, the title said it best.

I have to say, your biggest mistake would be the short pause in the middle. IMO, music should stay consistent.

Wow, you spelled "encounter" wrong in your title.

It seems to upbeat for just a random enemy.

However, if this is just a random encounter, I'd love to hear your interpretation of a final boss.

(This is CF from TSO)

Sorry, I'm no good with titles.

I owe Territory War for showing me such a great artist.

Words cannot describe fear, but music can.

Oh, yay, new art.

Unlike your more cartoony drawings, this picture has very good detail and shading. Not what I'd expect to see from you, but a very good drawing nonetheless.

The only problems I can see are Link's left ear (not sure exactly WHAT'S wrong with it, though) and the eyes (they look too much like pearls, and make the drawing feel unreal).

I assuming he's just been brainwashed from so many annoying fairy partners yelling in his ear...HEY! LISTEN! ...Okay, I guess that wasn't funny or necessary in the slightest.

Anyways, this gets a 9/10, and, much like the last piece of art I reviewed from you, the time and effort shines through. Congratulations, sir, you've won another 5/5.

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The only reason I envy this...

...Is because it is a .gif, which I have yet to be able to create. There are so many things wrong with this drawing, but mostly I believe the quote-unquote "body anatomy" is off. Also, there's a lot of negative white space. Speaking of white space, what the heck are they standing on? Are they just infinitely falling through nothing?

Don't get we wrong, I love the older Sonic games to death, and I enjoy watching Naruto Shippuden with in Japanese with English subtitles. I just don't like your drawing.

I'm giving you a 4/10 because I'm sure you can improve, and 4/10 doesn't need rounding, so that calculates to 2/...Wait, you're nto scouted, my bad.

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People think this is a useless review.

I like this style.

Judging from her eyes, I can assume she's either worried, troubled, or just been crying. Perhaps that's just me, but I think I'm right for once.

Never once have I seen any monochrome drawing looking so cool. It makes it hard to shade, but when it's monochrome, you don't really need to shade (correct me if I'm wrong here).

The background is black, and it really helps this picture. It's as if the shadows themselves are fusing into her...But that's obviously not your intention.

Am I the only one that sees the gray lightning bolt symbol, that is supposedly part of her hair? Yeah? Thought so.

For all of the aforementioned reasons (Except for when I was screwing around and adding my thoughts), this picture earns a 10/10. 10/10 doesn't need rounding, so you also get a 5/... Oh, wait, you're not scouted yet. D: